Spring came today
The sun shone bravely after winter's last bite
The birds sang valiantly nearly broken by the enduring chill
But with hope shining forth
People smiled and looked to the sky
Children spun round and round
We spoke
The deadlock broke
An end to the winter of discontent
Spring has come
New movement has begun
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I really liked this: 'The birds sang valiantly'. It does give away your special relationship with birds.
ReplyDeleteAnd I liked this a lot too: 'We spoke
The deadlock broke' an involuntarily rhyme perhaps? but it conveys a very effective imgage.
All in all, I think it is a powerful little poem. Well done, You.